I made a lot of sentence and grammar errors. I had too many sentences with two complete thoughts and many spelling and punctuation errors. Next time I need to read my paper better for these mistakes so they won’t happen again. In my first paper, I was able to make some strong sentences but the flow of the paper was not as good because of the mistakes.
I believe I now exhibit better control of the flow and ideas of my paper starting with my thesis statement. I constantly have incorrect sentence structure and have slightly improved since the beginning of the semester however, I am going to have to look out for this in the future during my own editing. I think the flow of my papers have improved greatly because of my editing and having stronger word choice to properly display my opinions.